A cobweb of faith

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You came
sailing
on a tidal wave

pierced your way
through my delicate veins
and moored your ship
on the shores
of my lonely heart

and I
started weaving
a cobweb of faith
around our love

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77 thoughts on “A cobweb of faith

    • Thank you so much!! Off, my name sounds so silly with English-speaking people…maybe I should change it, no, I think I should not, it is a beautiful Norwegian name, it’s just the English language that makes it so silly……Anyway, thank you for appreciating my poem!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

      • I don’t find your name sounds silly, on the contrary, maybe because I am not a native speaker – it sounds like “lines”, and I find it very NICE πŸ™‚ take care!

      • Thank you so much!! πŸ™‚ That makes me so happy!!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ You also take good care of yourself, and keep showering us with all those beautiful poems!! πŸ™‚

  1. wow agreed with FGM those lines “cobweb of faith around our love” is just fantastic! This poem is so gentle and serene line, a piece of beauty!…sailing on a tidal wave is such a perfect imagery πŸ™‚ ❀

    • Thank you so much!! I was little hesitant to publish this, but I did it anyway!! πŸ™‚ Now it feels nice! πŸ™‚ Your comment means the world to me!! πŸ™‚ Thank you Neha!! πŸ™‚

  2. Hi Line…your name is beautiful and it suits you…because you are BEAUTIFUL!! I love this poem…so ethereal…floating in the beauty of magnificent love. Blessitude πŸ™‚

    • Thank you so very much! πŸ™‚ I do like my name, and I also feel like it suits me, but that is when it is pronounced in Norwgeian, like Lee-Neh, I do not like when people say line in English. Well, anyway, it is just a name. I am so thrilled that you love this poem! It was one of those poems that just came to me effortlessly, like I just woke up and there it was, at the tip of my tongue! πŸ™‚ So lovely when that happens! πŸ™‚ Lots of Love to you my sweet soulsister! πŸ™‚

      • I wondered if that is how your name is pronounced!! I have seen you write hihi…which in English we would write hehe. So I wondered. Now I know!! And it is even more beautiful!!!! And yes, the divine poems that sit on your tongue waiting for you to record…are so wonderful!! Much love soulsister πŸ™‚ and if you EVER travel to the east coast of the U. S. Be sure to let me know πŸ˜‰

    • Yes, it can be both romantic and be about trusting the Love of Heaven πŸ™‚ That will be up to the reader to decide how it feels to them in their life πŸ™‚ Lots and lots of love to you too Meliza! πŸ™‚

  3. I agree with others here who say your words ‘Cobweb of faith’ resonated.. it did with me too.. I enlarge your photo Beautiful.. and just loved your poem.. πŸ™‚ You just manage to merge and connect all as it should be.. πŸ™‚ xxx

    • I took this photo too in Singapore, in a Swan Lake, the feather just came floating towards me. I chose to let it illustrate this poem because I feel that the poem can be both about romantic love, and the love of heaven, like being touched by the beautiful unconditional love of the divine πŸ™‚

    • Oh, thank you!! πŸ™‚ That is so amazing!! πŸ™‚ That you can feel it, I mean πŸ™‚ Every poem wants to be felt I think πŸ™‚

  4. @”on the shores of my lonely heart…” – this very line has reminded me of Rimbaud… πŸ™‚
    btw, when do you “sail” back to your wonderful homeland that I love so much?… πŸ˜‰
    * * *
    have a positive week and tons of inspiration… cheers, MΓ©lanie ❀

    • I sail back there hopefully in july or August! πŸ™‚ My Love for Norway is about the sea and islands, and sky and mountains and lakes and fjords πŸ™‚ That is what I miss! πŸ™‚ You too have a lovely lovely week!! πŸ™‚

      • kjΓ¦re Line, tusen takk for din utdypet svar-forklaring… Jeg har fΓ₯tt poenget ditt, jeg har forstΓ₯tt ditt valg og vedtak som jeg absolutt respekt… du har kanskje hΓΈrt om den kjente Latin sier og et verdensomspennende sannhet:”Ubi bene, Ibi patria” – β€œhvor jeg er godt, rolig, det er (min) hjemland.” Jeg har ogsΓ₯ vΓ¦rt til Stavanger som imponerte meg mindre enn resten av Norge… πŸ™‚ Jeg snakker ikke norsk, jeg bare forstΓ₯r noen ord, her og der, mer enn i islandsk … men Mr og Mrs Google er ganske raus, hjelpsom og nyttig med meg! πŸ˜‰ holde seg frisk, kjΓΈlig og optimistisk! lykke til i alle sammenhenger og vennlige klemmer fra Toulouse, Frankrike, β€œdet gamle Europa”! πŸ™‚ c u asap!

  5. This one is different, Line, from your usual and I like it. I see you have begun to brach out. I love this truly love this!! Thank you SO much for sharing you! Love, Amy

    • Thank you so much Amy! πŸ™‚ This poem just came to me, it is not really composed, it just came as it is and I just wrote it down πŸ™‚ Lots of Love to you sister! πŸ™‚

      • Line, that is how my work comes to me. Go with it, Line. It is powerful and it is wonderful. Don’t question. You will be amazed at what comes forth! Love, Amy

    • Thank you! πŸ™‚ Yes, this poem can both be about romantic love and about being touched by God’s Love πŸ™‚ Let’s hope more will come! πŸ™‚

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