You came
sailing
on a tidal wave
pierced your way
through my delicate veins
and moored your ship
on the shores
of my lonely heart
and I
started weaving
a cobweb of faith
around our love
You came
sailing
on a tidal wave
pierced your way
through my delicate veins
and moored your ship
on the shores
of my lonely heart
and I
started weaving
a cobweb of faith
around our love
The Paths of the Spirit 
beautiful poem and images you weave Line! Weaving love and light between our lonely hearts, you sprinkle delight! XD
Hihi, sprinkle delight!! 🙂 Yaay! 🙂 That is so sweet of you to say! If I could I would weave a garment of Love and Light then I would give one each to everyone in the world!! 🙂
I believe you already do that with your enthusiastic comments, smiley faces, poems and open heart. Thank you! ❤
Hihi!! 🙂 I am a very expressive person! 🙂 And I love the ❤ s ! Thank you! 🙂
🙂 ❤ XD
Wow–nice.
Thank you! 🙂 I am so happy that you liked this! 🙂
Very romantic, yet subtle–easy to relate to.
🙂 🙂 🙂 Thank you! 🙂
Just wow ~ I’m speechless. xoxo
Oh, I am so thrilled and touched and happy that you liked the poem so much!!! :-):-) 🙂
I really love the imagery…what a beautiful evocative poem! 🙂
Thank you for visiting my blog and giving me an opportunity to read your wonderful poetry 🙂
Thank you so much!! 🙂 Now you have made me smile brightly! 🙂 Thank you so much for visting me here!! So nice to meet you! 🙂
🙂 🙂
Good to read a love poem from you; hope you’ll do it again. Cheers!
Thank you! 🙂 Yes, this poem can both be about romantic love and about being touched by God’s Love 🙂 Let’s hope more will come! 🙂
So delicate and beautiful Line, love this 🙂 xx
Thank you so much beautiful Himani! 🙂 That means so much to me! 🙂 Lots of Love to you dear sister 🙂
Oh Line, I really like this one. Really beautiful.
🙂
Thank you so very much!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Oh, this is just gorgeous. The words and the image go so well together and speak to me of vulnerability, trust, love. It touches me deeply.
That is such a beautiful comment Linda! 🙂 Thank you so much! 🙂 I will treausre it.
This one is different, Line, from your usual and I like it. I see you have begun to brach out. I love this truly love this!! Thank you SO much for sharing you! Love, Amy
Thank you so much Amy! 🙂 This poem just came to me, it is not really composed, it just came as it is and I just wrote it down 🙂 Lots of Love to you sister! 🙂
Line, that is how my work comes to me. Go with it, Line. It is powerful and it is wonderful. Don’t question. You will be amazed at what comes forth! Love, Amy
Oh love… So pretty… Have a great week… Much love, Lor
Thank you so much! 🙂 You have a nice week too! 🙂
Beautiful words!
Thank you so very much!! 🙂
@”on the shores of my lonely heart…” – this very line has reminded me of Rimbaud… 🙂
btw, when do you “sail” back to your wonderful homeland that I love so much?… 😉
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have a positive week and tons of inspiration… cheers, Mélanie ❤
I sail back there hopefully in july or August! 🙂 My Love for Norway is about the sea and islands, and sky and mountains and lakes and fjords 🙂 That is what I miss! 🙂 You too have a lovely lovely week!! 🙂
kjære Line, tusen takk for din utdypet svar-forklaring… Jeg har fått poenget ditt, jeg har forstått ditt valg og vedtak som jeg absolutt respekt… du har kanskje hørt om den kjente Latin sier og et verdensomspennende sannhet:”Ubi bene, Ibi patria” – “hvor jeg er godt, rolig, det er (min) hjemland.” Jeg har også vært til Stavanger som imponerte meg mindre enn resten av Norge… 🙂 Jeg snakker ikke norsk, jeg bare forstår noen ord, her og der, mer enn i islandsk … men Mr og Mrs Google er ganske raus, hjelpsom og nyttig med meg! 😉 holde seg frisk, kjølig og optimistisk! lykke til i alle sammenhenger og vennlige klemmer fra Toulouse, Frankrike, “det gamle Europa”! 🙂 c u asap!
Again…’cobweb of faith’… your beautiful poem expresses to me the tenderness of love. Xox
Oh, thank you!! 🙂 That is a beautiful thing to say!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
very delicate and gentle. ❤ Beautiful.
Thank you!! 🙂 🙂 I love delicate and gentle 🙂 🙂
Me too. ❤
I love this poem. Beautiful metaphors.
I can feel it…
Oh, thank you!! 🙂 That is so amazing!! 🙂 That you can feel it, I mean 🙂 Every poem wants to be felt I think 🙂
Like rain on barren land.
🙂 🙂 Thank you! 🙂
I agree with others here who say your words ‘Cobweb of faith’ resonated.. it did with me too.. I enlarge your photo Beautiful.. and just loved your poem.. 🙂 You just manage to merge and connect all as it should be.. 🙂 xxx
I took this photo too in Singapore, in a Swan Lake, the feather just came floating towards me. I chose to let it illustrate this poem because I feel that the poem can be both about romantic love, and the love of heaven, like being touched by the beautiful unconditional love of the divine 🙂
Well Line it worked beautifully. 🙂 the feather itself could have been an angel 🙂
Love and Blessings and enjoy your week.
Sue
Love and blessings to you too!! and have a splendid week ahead! 🙂
“A cobweb of faith around our love” – how beautiful and romantic, Line! I love this 🙂 🙂 With lots of love and thanks to you xxxx
Yes, it can be both romantic and be about trusting the Love of Heaven 🙂 That will be up to the reader to decide how it feels to them in their life 🙂 Lots and lots of love to you too Meliza! 🙂
Ah, Line …. I so love this lovely love poem. Thank you
Thank you so very much!! 🙂 I am so happy that you do! 🙂
Hi Line…your name is beautiful and it suits you…because you are BEAUTIFUL!! I love this poem…so ethereal…floating in the beauty of magnificent love. Blessitude 🙂
Thank you so very much! 🙂 I do like my name, and I also feel like it suits me, but that is when it is pronounced in Norwgeian, like Lee-Neh, I do not like when people say line in English. Well, anyway, it is just a name. I am so thrilled that you love this poem! It was one of those poems that just came to me effortlessly, like I just woke up and there it was, at the tip of my tongue! 🙂 So lovely when that happens! 🙂 Lots of Love to you my sweet soulsister! 🙂
I wondered if that is how your name is pronounced!! I have seen you write hihi…which in English we would write hehe. So I wondered. Now I know!! And it is even more beautiful!!!! And yes, the divine poems that sit on your tongue waiting for you to record…are so wonderful!! Much love soulsister 🙂 and if you EVER travel to the east coast of the U. S. Be sure to let me know 😉
I will! 🙂 Who knows where the wind will blow me 🙂
I always love images of weaving…
🙂 Me too!! 🙂
So Wonderful 🙂 Shows so simply and Beautifully how we can Treasure everything. Sweet Blessings Friend ~
Thank you so very much! 🙂 You are sweet! 🙂 Blessings of Love and Light to you as well dear Morgan! 🙂
I love that ending, cobweb of faith around our love ~
Thank you so much!! 🙂 It just came to me, like a revelation:-)
I must send you a “cobweb”!
🙂 🙂 🙂
Cobweb of faith is brilliant!
Thank you so much! 🙂
So beautiful Line 🙂 Love it!
Oh, thank you!! That makes me jump with joy, I mean literally jump!! 🙂
🙂
I really like This! 🙂
Oh, thank you!! 🙂 I really like you!! 🙂
Thank you so much. I am quite fond of you as well 🙂
🙂 🙂 🙂 we are fond of each other! 🙂 Yaay! 🙂
You make me Laugh! ❤ ❤ ❤
wow agreed with FGM those lines “cobweb of faith around our love” is just fantastic! This poem is so gentle and serene line, a piece of beauty!…sailing on a tidal wave is such a perfect imagery 🙂 ❤
Thank you so much!! I was little hesitant to publish this, but I did it anyway!! 🙂 Now it feels nice! 🙂 Your comment means the world to me!! 🙂 Thank you Neha!! 🙂
…”a cobweb of faith
around our love”…
Graceful by lines… by Line. Thank you 🙂 F.
Thank you so much!! Off, my name sounds so silly with English-speaking people…maybe I should change it, no, I think I should not, it is a beautiful Norwegian name, it’s just the English language that makes it so silly……Anyway, thank you for appreciating my poem!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
I don’t find your name sounds silly, on the contrary, maybe because I am not a native speaker – it sounds like “lines”, and I find it very NICE 🙂 take care!
Thank you so much!! 🙂 That makes me so happy!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 You also take good care of yourself, and keep showering us with all those beautiful poems!! 🙂