Could I lie once more
in the breathing brooks
of twilight dim
and fill my heart
with each haunted place
I saw upon your lips
I would walk again
through winds of dreams
as though I was a ship
a’blow, adrift
to the shore
of yesterday’s last kiss
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Sadly beautiful, especially knowing the reason behind the verse.
Yes, I guess it is little melancholic. But my friend finds lots of comfort remembering that beautiful love she shared with her husband ❤ 🙂
It is truly beautiful. Finding comfort and peace in a poem written for another is wonderful. It touched my heart, as I know it did hers ❤
Oh, thank you so so very much! ❤ That means a lot to me! ❤ 🙂
Beautiful, Trini!
Thank you so so much Lisa! 🙂 🙂 ❤
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Ship adrift to shore of yesterday’s last kiss is a refreshing piece of imagery, Trini, may fairer winds take that ship to many more enchanting shores of loving bliss…
Oh, thank you so so much!! What a lovely comment! 🙂 I am sure the ship will do that indeed.
Beautiful words of tribute..please offer your friend my condolences..
Thank you so much 🙂 I will ❤
❤ !
Very beautiful, words and kindness. ☺❤
🙂 Thank you! ❤
You’re welcome! ☺
🙂
Captivating!!!
🙂 Thank you 🙂
So eloquent. Makes my heart hurt for your friend. It’s just beautiful!
Thank you ❤ She is okay. Her granddaughter said to her (at the funeral) : Oh, I will never get married if this is how love works. Then my friend said: I am so so lucky to have someone to long for, to have loved and been loved in return, now the memories of that love will keep me happy for the rest of my life ❤
Thank you for sharing this Trini. How sweet to see the joy in the midst of so much sadness.
yes, it is important for her to focus on celebrating their love ❤
Sweet… 🙂
Thank you 🙂
🙂
lovely my friend ❤
🙂 Thank you ❤
this one is so beuatifully composed it went with the perfect flow ……feeling are so deep .amazing dear
Thank you!! 🙂 I really appreciate it 🙂
Tender and melancholy. And wonderful music on your sidebar! Thanks Trini.
Thank you so so much ! 🙂 🙂
The music is wonderful, but today I don’t see it?
Yes, it is down today. But will be back soon even better 🙂
Good, I was enjoying the music last night. So peaceful. Thanks! 🙂
🙂 🙂 🙂
Beautiful 🙂 ❤
Thank you so much 🙂 ❤
This is so wonderful! I love this so much! Wow! Your precious giving heart is so wonderful! Much love and hugs to you! 💜💗💕💓
Thank you so so much ❤ You are so lovely ❤ big hugs ❤